Necessary by the Order CH 2 - A Toast to Sirius Black
Sirius on a Bike by Nassima
Necessary by the Order CH 2 - A Toast to Sirius Black
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Necessary by the Order CH 2
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sirena_lupin From: sirena_lupin Date: March 9th, 2006 03:41 am (UTC) (Link)
I *love* marriage law fics... but you've got a few plot holes going. I think it's a great start, to be sure, and I'm really glad there's one post-hbp so that Snape's blood is taken into account... however, I'd really like to see you address how Sirius is a.) not dead and b.) (being that he is an escaped convict) would be an acceptable match. Wouldn't the ministry just arrest him right after they got married? Also... Tonks is a half-blood. What will they do with her?

Please, please keep writing. Like I said... I love marriage law fics and I really like the idea to do one with Sirius. Fill in the holes and this could be absolutely superb.
serade_black From: serade_black Date: March 9th, 2006 03:43 am (UTC) (Link)
Thank you for the notes! They are totally appreciated and I am so thankful it wasn't just a praise.

Will handle Sirius being not dead.
Will deal with Tonks! *thanks so much for the heads up*

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